The transformation you used is a really nice and simple way to solve the problem. I liked how you used elements of the toothpaste to resemble and turn into elements in the snail. The squished and surprised snail is a nice touch when the shell came down, but I think you could have emphasized the squish through the shell more and that would make the shell appear more cohesive to the snail than just stuck to its back.
Yours was one of my favorites. It's so simple yet it really works. I love the way the tube of toothpaste rolls up into the snail shell, brilliant! I agree with what Heather said about how you showed the weight of the shell by squishing the snail, that was cute.
My only suggestions would be just to continue building upon the animation. You could go back and add more frames to make the scene more smooth. You could also go back and add minor details like a face for the snail, or a label on the toothpaste.
I really enjoy the simplicity used in your animation. The drawings are really simple however they both work together really well. You can tell that there’s a connection between the snail, and the toothpaste thingy… one suggestion that I have its maybe have a little bit more of the snail perhaps you can make it dance. nah j.k.. I don’t really have anything good to say your project sucks. Hahahaha…
The transformation you used is a really nice and simple way to solve the problem. I liked how you used elements of the toothpaste to resemble and turn into elements in the snail. The squished and surprised snail is a nice touch when the shell came down, but I think you could have emphasized the squish through the shell more and that would make the shell appear more cohesive to the snail than just stuck to its back.
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ReplyDeleteYours was one of my favorites. It's so simple yet it really works. I love the way the tube of toothpaste rolls up into the snail shell, brilliant! I agree with what Heather said about how you showed the weight of the shell by squishing the snail, that was cute.
My only suggestions would be just to continue building upon the animation. You could go back and add more frames to make the scene more smooth. You could also go back and add minor details like a face for the snail, or a label on the toothpaste.
Great job with the project!
I really enjoy the simplicity used in your animation. The drawings are really simple however they both work together really well. You can tell that there’s a connection between the snail, and the toothpaste thingy… one suggestion that I have its maybe have a little bit more of the snail perhaps you can make it dance. nah j.k.. I don’t really have anything good to say your project sucks. Hahahaha…
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