Wednesday, September 9, 2009

Brim's Page

http://webpages.uncc.edu/~basoh/
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4 comments:

  1. Dwayne RoyallSeptember 9, 2009 at 10:32 AM

    Your character had a lot of detail and line movement which made it visually appealing. The transformation from the box to the nose was really well done. The shading also gives it a better sense of depth and weight. I would have liked to seen some changes in the shadowing of the nose when it was sniffing. Also it could have been a little more smoother by adding some additional frames. Overall the animation was well thought out and neatly done.

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  2. Jessica SossSeptember 9, 2009 at 10:33 AM

    I love the way the lines are drawn on the nose, it gives it a lot of cool texture that was different from everyone elses. When I first saw it I really liked your overall approach to the project. I wasnt expecting something to burst out of the box and then suck up the thing it just popped out of. The only thing I would maybe change is the line work at the very end. The grey shadow might be a little too dark and starts to look less like a shadow and more like a solid object. It also overlaps your lines on the feet of the nose, but it still looks great and made me laugh.

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  3. Lain PhinithSeptember 9, 2009 at 10:39 AM

    The design process was very good. The drawing of the characters were on point. And the shading gives it some depth. Some of the parts were a bit choppy, maybe add some more key frames for a better transition. Overall the animation was done well.

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  4. AnonymousSeptember 9, 2009 at 10:41 AM

    i really like how the box transform into the nose is really smooth. i like how the nose walk toward the screen instead off to the side. when it transform back to the box i think it will be nice to take the nose complete off the screen. Few more frames when it transform back to the box bc it seen too fast, just want to see more.

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