I commend you on a job well done. You had a very difficult object to make move across the screen. But I think you approached it in the best way. However I do feel that you should have done more with the cow. It would have been great if it would have been abducted up in to the spacecraft and then the spacecraft spin and float away. I don't think that it needed to be changed back in to a hamburger. The line quality was great! And the text "moo" was quite humorous. It definitely added a new quality to the animation.
I like your piece, especially the first time the bun, meat, and lettuce separate than come back together before the the transformation. It reminds me of card dealers when they do that fancy move with the cards while they're shuffling and the cards all flow from one hand to the other. Do you know what I mean? Anyway, I would've liked to see a little more detail on the burger, perhaps some sesame seeds on the bun, and a little more detail when the pieces separate then come back together. I think it was a really funny idea for it to turn into the cow and UFO - random, but a great random! Maybe also add some movement to the cow while the UFO is shining the light on it. The cow is totally still and I think it would add to it if it looked shocked or its legs sprawled out like it was surprised or something.. But good concept, I love the connection between burgers and cows. It actually just hit me that the burger meat comes from the cow, so it's not quite so random, but just random enough. :)
Geo, I like your transformation of the beef patty and bun into a cow and ufo. It is funny. Your line quality is quite good. But I agree with heather, I would have like to see more of the second transformation, like if you had the ufo struggle to pull the cow onboard or maybe in the process of pulling it up the ufo drops the cow and it turns back into a patty followed by the ufo back into a bun. But overall good work.
I really like you piece. I laughed when i 1st watched it. I think that the spaceship idea and the patty turning into a cow was a great idea. I do wish that the cow would have been more animated. Maybe he could get big eyes of legs start moving.
I think that you did a great job with you animation. I really like the lines you have that are going through the animation it just adds to the creepiness of the house. The only thing that i think needs improving is the cat and the bird they need to actually walk/fly.
hey man nice work i really like some of the effects you have on you animation, i like the mixture you have between pictures and drawings... Some of the buttons are really interesting such as the light, and the tree growing by the side of the house. Other might need more work like the cat also I wasn't able to find the one that has the bird.. Overall great job tho man
I commend you on a job well done. You had a very difficult object to make move across the screen. But I think you approached it in the best way. However I do feel that you should have done more with the cow. It would have been great if it would have been abducted up in to the spacecraft and then the spacecraft spin and float away. I don't think that it needed to be changed back in to a hamburger. The line quality was great! And the text "moo" was quite humorous. It definitely added a new quality to the animation.
ReplyDeleteI like your piece, especially the first time the bun, meat, and lettuce separate than come back together before the the transformation. It reminds me of card dealers when they do that fancy move with the cards while they're shuffling and the cards all flow from one hand to the other. Do you know what I mean? Anyway, I would've liked to see a little more detail on the burger, perhaps some sesame seeds on the bun, and a little more detail when the pieces separate then come back together. I think it was a really funny idea for it to turn into the cow and UFO - random, but a great random! Maybe also add some movement to the cow while the UFO is shining the light on it. The cow is totally still and I think it would add to it if it looked shocked or its legs sprawled out like it was surprised or something.. But good concept, I love the connection between burgers and cows. It actually just hit me that the burger meat comes from the cow, so it's not quite so random, but just random enough. :)
ReplyDeleteGeo, I like your transformation of the beef patty and bun into a cow and ufo. It is funny. Your line quality is quite good. But I agree with heather, I would have like to see more of the second transformation, like if you had the ufo struggle to pull the cow onboard or maybe in the process of pulling it up the ufo drops the cow and it turns back into a patty followed by the ufo back into a bun. But overall good work.
ReplyDeleteI really like you piece. I laughed when i 1st watched it. I think that the spaceship idea and the patty turning into a cow was a great idea. I do wish that the cow would have been more animated. Maybe he could get big eyes of legs start moving.
ReplyDeleteI think that you did a great job with you animation. I really like the lines you have that are going through the animation it just adds to the creepiness of the house. The only thing that i think needs improving is the cat and the bird they need to actually walk/fly.
ReplyDeletehey man nice work i really like some of the effects you have on you animation, i like the mixture you have between pictures and drawings... Some of the buttons are really interesting such as the light, and the tree growing by the side of the house. Other might need more work like the cat also I wasn't able to find the one that has the bird.. Overall great job tho man
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