Monday, November 9, 2009

Project 3

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4 comments:

  1. EmilyNovember 9, 2009 at 9:38 AM

    I like the text you chose to illustrate, it's very humorous and lyrical. All of your links work save for your public domain credit link. Aesthetically I don't think it was very even. your trees and spaghetti for instance were very well thought out and well illustrated but the rolling meatball or the bush, not so much. Overall I thought it was a pretty funny animation, the audio byte of a person sneezing went along with it perfectly.

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  2. Lauren McClureNovember 9, 2009 at 9:45 AM

    I thought that the story was nice. The illustration of the spaghetti and the tree was done very well. The meatball could use a little work. I if you didn't have the words to go along with it I would have never known that it was a meatball. Overall I think that you did a good job keeping the graphics together. some of them just need a little bit of work.

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  3. emilydianeNovember 9, 2009 at 9:50 AM

    TECHNICAL: All of the navigation works correctly so that is great. I didn't have any problems viewing or moving through the movie.

    AESTHETIC: I feel like your graphics need alot of work. Everything just seems very flat...sort of like you didn't spend much time on them. Your spaghetti and your tree look really great though. The emphasis of the sotry is on the meatball, and there are so many things you could do to it to really jazz it up and make it look more like a meat ball. I think that giving your graphics more depth would help too.

    CONCEPT: I haven't heard this story in forever! I loved it. It is really humorous and fun, and I really like the big sneeze at the end. Great job.

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  4. B. SohNovember 9, 2009 at 10:13 AM

    Wow, I haven't heard that in a while! I really do like where you are going with this and the animation of the tree really worked well! I couldn't seem to get my shape tween or motion tween to come out like that... I am jealous!

    I feel that the overall aesthetic of the piece is to sharp for the flow of the poem. It needs more movement and I kinda wanted to see a person sneezing the meatball away. That would have been more cool.

    For this project maybe using collage pieces could have helped give some kind of depth to it as well.

    It's a very funny animation and I really like the idea behind it but I want to see more lively vibrant animations.

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