Monday, November 9, 2009

scott hunnicutt project three myth

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  1. AnonymousNovember 9, 2009 at 9:47 AM

    scott...
    good work on your animation! The design was consistent and you kept to what the story was about. It seems that you spent more time on certain graphics than others (cerebus was looking abit like a blob) but overall it had very good illustrations. I would have like to see the info separate from the title page though (it would have flowed better..) also some eerie sound in the background would be great!

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  2. Sheldon KazmarskiNovember 9, 2009 at 10:26 AM

    I too think some more time could have been spent on animations. They feel a bit underdeveloped. Also, the font choice was poor. It felt very stuck on and not part of the page itself. Papyrus is one of those fonts that only looks decent at a large scale. Also I'm glad that you have a back button and a forwards button. However, they also do not fit the theme of the story. Maybe you could look into plugging in some different imagery as a place holder. If you need an example, check my splash page. You and I both did Greek/Roman themed stories. But if you look instead of just email me..I made it Mercury Mail...like the messenger of the gods...little details like that are something to keep in mind. Overall, good job.

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  3. Jessica SossNovember 11, 2009 at 10:54 AM

    I think it looks like you worked very hard on this and put a lot of thought into how you would portray your story. Your drawings are great, but like the others said, some drawings looked like they could be revisited. I also agree that you could use another typeface, maybe if you want something decorative but not too crazy you can check out dafont.com, there are a ton to choose from. I think you've put a lot of time and effort into all of your projects this semester and I appreciate that. With a few alterations, this would be an outstanding piece.

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