Monday, November 9, 2009

Animation Project 3 Queen of Hearts
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  1. emilydianeNovember 9, 2009 at 9:55 AM

    TECHNICAL: Everything works great. Navigation is good.

    AESTHETIC: I really enjoy the simplicity of the whole thing. It works even though you don't have fancy graphics and lots of motion tweens. You were very consistent throughout the movie with keeping all of your animations on the same level aesthetically, so good job. I don't like the type though, I think there are other fonts that would have worked better.

    CONCEPT: A cute story, I liked it. EXCELLENT WORK AMIGO!

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  2. Jay BallardNovember 9, 2009 at 10:07 AM

    Maybe it was just my computer or something but the button doesn't work to enter the story. The first page looked great though. The minimal use of color looked nice. and the animation was fluent.

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  3. EmilyNovember 9, 2009 at 10:17 AM

    Your project had a realized aesthetic to it, same spot color throughout, every page with the same illustrative style on it, spot illustrations throughout, it all made the piece feel more like a whole. Also I can recognize a sort of closet humor to your piece that I enjoyed (the knave licking the tarts, the hand snatching the tart from up under the queen's dress) In your splashpage you could benefit with a transparent box for your enter button, at the moment it is hard to figure out as is. Nice animated buttons they really went with your concept. Also you really made the nursery rhyme your own by using cats and mice instead of people.

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  4. B. SohNovember 9, 2009 at 10:17 AM

    Hey Lauren

    I really think that you're illustrations and your text work well together. The color scheme choices really gives it that "children book" feeling.

    I talked with you yesterday about this as well. I think that it is a very simple piece but it really works well together. Very nice to see more move-able animations in your piece!

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