Monday, November 9, 2009

project3 christian anzola

http://webpages.uncc.edu/~canzola/christian_anzola2.html
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4 comments:

  1. Elisha FleckNovember 9, 2009 at 9:39 AM

    what up!

    Technical:
    I like that you used the face of the woman as your animated button, with her eyes blinking; however, there seems to be a problem with the hit area because it's hard to find the place to click to go forward. Also, the "blinking" of her eye is a little jumpy, so try easing in/out. Great job with the narrative video and editing...the sound is interesting, suits the theme, very creepy; wonder if there are better/more choices for sounds though

    Aesthetic:
    I like the overall sepia tones, it seems to fit well with the story/legend and creates a sad, nostalgic feel. Again, you did a good job with video editing and composition; the narrative flows nicely. Would have liked to seen more visual texture or additional imagery though to complement the video.

    Concept:
    Again, your concept/theme is apparent throughout the site, very stark and nostalgic; sad. etc.

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  2. Karly HahnNovember 9, 2009 at 9:46 AM

    Technically I think the piece works well.. I like the choice of video, because I think it gives more of a true to life feeling rather than some made up story or fairy tale.
    Aesthetically it works well. You have a consistent color scheme and it gives a mood that matches the story you are telling.
    The concept is depicted well through your graphics, and it is all very sad and emotional.
    Good job!

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  3. Karly HahnNovember 9, 2009 at 9:47 AM

    Oh, I also meant to say that it was an interesting choice of button to have the girl blinking - unique choice

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  4. AnonymousNovember 9, 2009 at 9:53 AM

    I like the visual, very scary ^^ don't know where is the button or to click. Creative way to use video and effects. I think the video matches the concept. I wish to have the choice to skip the video after I'm done reading. The typography fit the movie. over all I think is a well finish project. The overlay button is a little off to the right side.

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