Monday, November 9, 2009

Project 3: Hey Diddle Diddle

http://webpages.uncc.edu/~eefurr/

Pile-o Crap-o

4 comments:

  1. TECHNICAL: Everything here is working properly, but it is not the easiest movie to navigate through. I wasn't sure where your navigation buttons were and it took me some time to figure out I was supposed to click on the type.

    AESTHETIC: I really enjoy your illustrative style. It is very visual interesting and fun to look at. I got a real sense of depth and movement throughout the movie. However, I do think that your typography could use a little work. I felt like the type you chose was more on the serious/business side and it didn't really match the feel of your story. Also, I felt like the animations were very slow, maybe removing some frames inside your tweens could speed them up a little.

    CONCEPT: Great concept. This timeless nursery rhyme was an interesting choice for the project. It presented many different opportunities to present a variety of settings and graphics. Nice work:)

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  2. The project seams to flow well. Using invisible buttons over the text seams to work well. I like the animation style you used. although It seamed to change in the space scene. The project is well thought out and the concept is good. I feel you successfully animated the story.

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  3. Everything works correctly, however I think that if I didn't already know to click on the text then I would have had a really hard time figuring it out. I think that the aesthetics are GREAT. You can tell that you worked really hard on the cat. I actually thought that the type look pretty good, especially on the splash page.The concept is good "dish ran away with the spoon", was a good idea.

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  4. I liked the idea of using an old school poem like that because everyone knows about it, but that can also be hard as well because everyone is going to have an idea of what to expect.

    I like where you are going with this and I really do wish to see where you can take it further, because you are a great illustrator!
    However, I do feel that it is not where it should be as far as finished, but I am anticipating for the finish piece!

    I did have one problem, I had no idea that I was supposed to click on the text( except for the "ENTER HERE") So, I just sat there waiting for something to happen, or maybe it could just be my lack of sleep...lol

    Keep up the good work!

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