Monday, November 9, 2009

Project 3, Fable Animation

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4 comments:

  1. emilydianeNovember 9, 2009 at 9:46 AM

    TECHNICAL: Your navigation system was great and I liked the idea of the clam as the button. I think that the fish swimming across the screen at the beginning was your preloader? If so...I was input some kind of status bar to let the view know what is going on.

    AESTHETIC: Your illustration skills are beautiful and really fun. They have a really whimsical quality to them that is very enjoyable. I loved all of the colors and the really funny faces on your characters. I think that you typography needs some work. I think there are some better font choices out there to go along with your story. Also, you have some grammatical errors that need to be looked at.

    CONCEPT: I love the little mermaid! It's definitely a great story. I'm glad you chose it. I like how you sort of rewrote it yourself and made it your own. Very cool.

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  2. EmilyNovember 9, 2009 at 9:54 AM

    I really like the illustrations especially with the added detail to texture in your pages. I like the sounds you chose to put into your piece, it helped set a mood and helped the illustrations with a little extra information. The preloader is very original but as a user I do not know when it would finish loading since there is not an indicator. The third page seems to be missing sound, it may not be but since the animation started so heavily with audio it seems that the third page's sounds is missing. If the text is a shorted version of the fable written by you, you may want to go through another revision or two for your manuscript. I really really like your illustrations, they help make this traditional story more a part of yours.

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  3. Lauren McClureNovember 9, 2009 at 10:11 AM

    I also had a hard time figuring out if that was the pre-loader. I kept wanting to click on the fish. I think that you did a fantastic job on the graphics and the sound.I really like the water video. I do think that the typography still needs a little bit of work.

    I really LOVE the little Mermaid and I think that you really did the story justice.

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  4. Jay BallardNovember 9, 2009 at 10:13 AM

    This project was easy to navigate through. The buttons were very easy to find. I liked the textures that you created with the water. The music seamed to go well with the sadder part of the story. I like the graphics that you drew it was very consistent. overall the project looks great and was well thought out. Good job.

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