Monday, November 9, 2009

The Hen with the Golden Eggs - project 3

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3 comments:

  1. Karly HahnNovember 9, 2009 at 9:52 AM

    This is a nice piece. I think technically it works well, the animated button of the feather is a nice touch.
    Aesthetically I enjoyed the photo mixed with the hand drawing. I think it could be even stronger if you incorporated more photos or perhaps animated the photo you used in some way. I like the simple color scheme - the golds and white. When he killed the chicken and you had some of the type in red I thought it was a little too different - I understand the idea behind it but I think it didn't quite fit right. I loved the use of gold words with the white text in each page.
    Conceptually I think the piece is strong and interesting. Good job!

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  2. AnonymousNovember 9, 2009 at 10:06 AM

    The button works fine and the flow is good, there is one part the text is on the top instead of the bottom... wonder if that's on purpose. I like the combination of photo and drawing ^^. The design is simple and yet works well, a good way to solve this project. The concept fit the visual, very easy to understand.

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  3. christian anzolaNovember 9, 2009 at 10:18 AM

    Get out of my face... ..
    Hey the technical part works really well it's really easy to navigate..
    i like the mix between the egg picture and the drawings... however there are some frames that i would like to see more of drawing skills..(the 3rd frame when the eggs change color) however you have a really good use of design the placement of the type, the color , and the font works really well... i think adding more interactivity to the piece would be lovely.. maybe more buttons or more animations like the chicken ... good job doggy the sound also work well , and the animated buttons are the shitsnut...

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