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poem: Thomas H. Crofts III design: Litfuse
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Jay,
ReplyDeleteI think your piece has a lot of potential. Your concept about greed up until death was really thought-provoking, and I like that idea. But there are some technical issues that are too distracting to see past and fully understand the concept. I think the major issue here is the resolution of your images; not high enough, especially in the objects in the back of the composition. I would try to find images that are fairly high in resolution so you can just scale them down if needed. I'd also try and pay more attention to the perspective, and refine the animations a bit to make them a little more convincing and exciting. I do like the sound you used, but more sounds on buttons would really help!
Good work!