Wednesday, October 7, 2009

Memento Mori

http://webpages.uncc.edu/%7Ejlsoss/

3 comments:

  1. I love the illustrative quality of the work, it is well drawn and the texture helps to emphasize the style. I think having the people suddenly appear was a great idea, if they had slowly faded in I might have not found them and its a bit disconcerting feeling seeing them appear quickly and I think goes along well with your concept. I'm pretty impressed with the sounds you chose for the animations as well.

    Since this is a really well done project I will have to nitpick. The left eye of the skull is sticking out past the skull, which is impossible but would be a real quick fix in your animation. I would have liked to see the scorpions legs move, since they do not it jerks the viewer away from piece and is distracting. The same with the spider it floats over the eye socket.

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  2. I found the drawing of the animation quite good. I agree with what Heather said about the ghosta. If it were me I would have dropped the alpha down to make the images appear more ghost-like. I liked the concept of the piece that there is this place of forgotten bodies and their souls were just forgotten and ignored.

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  3. I really enjoyed your piece, it was one of my favorites. I actually did see the moving Changeling, and I think that you hit it right on with the illustration. The black and white images of the boys really hammers the idea in as well.

    I really like the skull and how you have a distinctive foreground and background, that is really important to you overall composition. The soundtrack is neat too.

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