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poem: Thomas H. Crofts III design: Litfuse
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Karly,
ReplyDeleteI appreciated your use of vector-based graphics, and how consistently you used them. It really complimented the feel and theme of your piece (doctors, sterile environment, etc). Your animations worked well with your piece too, and played out smoothly. One thing that was distracting was the choice of typeface. I think #1, it was set too large, and the typeface itself might be reconsidered; it almost made the piece look even flatter. Try and think of a way to really incorporate the type and make it fit more naturally.
Good job!
I really like your idea, because it went out of the norm in my opinion. The idea of life and death and hospitals is great. I feel you thought it out very well. your buttons where easy to find and you had great animations. ONly thing i can think of to change would be maybe place the type in a different place or make it more subtle. other than that everything works great together. good work.
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