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poem: Thomas H. Crofts III design: Litfuse
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I like the dance like feeling to the your video. I do get a sense of day of the dead with this video. The sound not looping bothers me a little. Like someone said in crit. I wish the disco ball lights were behind the table instead in front. I like the twinkle animations on the disco ball. the overall button controls were nice. It looks like the hit state of the button that controls the dotted design on the wall seems like it was moved a little over. overall not a bad animation.
ReplyDeleteEmily,
ReplyDeleteI like the fact that you did something different with the concept of Dia de Los Muertos, you didn't do a typical mexican celebration, you changed it up a bit.
I agree with what most people commented on in critique as far as the perspectives being a little off. It would have helped the illustration if the tables and lines on the wall were correctly drawn. The light button in the top left corner throws me off a bit. I wish the lights would have twinkled or maybe just gone over the entire page, but at first they don't seem like lights, just dots on the wall, and they overlap the table in a weird way.
Other than those things, I thought it was well done and I enjoyed the techno.